oh good gravy! this is amazing, you've done a great job i must say. all sorts of crazy stuff going on, i love it!
on a more technical note. you're style is very cool, the sketchy look and use of white space really add a lot. I assume it was using an eraser afterwords. (which i've spent hours grudging over but never seem to get it right)
And the way that everything just seems to burst out at once, it grabs the eye. keep it up!